In my makeshift hospital, two soldiers lay. One young, one old. One grey, one blue.
“Them Yankees liberated me,” said the Union man, “they said I now had the privilege to fight for my freedom.” He chuckled, “I said ‘where you been the last hun’ed years? I done my fightin’ in these cotton fields.’”
“I joined this war for pa,” the boy in grey shed a tear, “now pa’s dead, an’ I don’t know why I’m fightin’ anymore.”
The man sighed, “seems we both stuck fightin’ another man’s war,”
They laughed together as grey and blue uniforms stained red.
Thanks to Charli Mills for hosting weekly flash fiction. check out her blog and join the fun with thousands of other writers. This week’s prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that heals America.
Soldiers usually fight other people’s war . By fate they become pawns on the chessboard of life in the hands of the leaders playing political games.
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Sadly those that sanction the war are rarely the one that ends up with stains on the uniform, the same colour with the same fate no matter which side you find yourself.
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Great story about the soldiers wearing the Blue and the Grey, and their unexpected discovery of common ground. I also admire how well you crafted age, gender and culture without relying on descriptions. that’s good craft.
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thanks Charli. the 99 word limit certainly helps me rediscover minimalism.
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